4 points
Prompt is clear in the essay.
Informative with clear focus and supporting details.
Very well organized; easy to read.
Voice is confident throughout.
Sentence flow throughout essay.
Nouns and verbs make essay informative.
Zero grammatical errors.
ESSAY PROMPT
IDEAS
ORGANIZATION
VOICE
SENTENCE FLUENCY
WORD CHOICE
CONVENTIONS
3 points
Prompt is somewhat clear in the essay.
Informative with clear focus with some supporting details.
Has a beginning, middle, and end.
Voice is confident moderately.
Sentences mostly flow.
Decent use of nouns and verbs.
Few grammatical errors.
2 points
Prompt needs to be elaborated.
Focus needs to be expanded and supporting details are needed.
Little organization, needs transitions.
Voice is somewhat confident.
Sentences needs to flow.
Needs specific nouns and verbs; too general.
Several grammatical errors.
1 point
Prompt was not included, and essay is irrelevant
Topic needs to be developed.
Organization is needed.
Little to no voice; needs confidence.
Sentences are difficult to read and do not flow.
Little to no use of specific nouns and verbs.
Many errors which make it hard to read and understand.
ASUH SCHOLARSHIP
Thank you for your interest in the ASUH Scholarship. This opportunity is available to all full-time, classified undergraduate students of UH Mānoa. This award was designed to assist students to financially offset the cost of tuition. (Awards may be subject to state and federal applicable taxes. This may also affect your financial aid status and cost of attendance.)
Funds can be awarded up to $1,000 per individual.
Applicants are only available for one award.
Note: Past and present ASUH Senators, Executive Officers, Student Court Members and ASUH student employees are not eligible to receive these awards. Students who have received this award are not eligible to apply again within the same academic school year.
APPLICATION DEADLINE FOR FALL 2024 APPLICANTS
APPLICATION DEADLINE: December 8, 2024 at 11:59pm HST
SCHOLARSHIP REQUIREMENTS
Student seeking to apply for the ASUH Scholarship Award:
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Must be a full-time, undergraduate, classified student at UH Mānoa
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Must apply under one of three categories:
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Academic Achievement (Cumulative GPA of 3.5 or higher)
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High Financial Need
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Unique Situation/Non-Traditional Student (Cumulative GPA of 3.0 or higher)
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Must complete all required fields of the online application
APPLICATION REQUIREMENTS
Student applying for the ASUH Scholarship Award:
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Must upload a .docx of the essay that should be no more than 750 words, double-spaced, in 12 point Times New Roman font. Must follow Essay Guidelines.
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Must submit a copy of their most recently completed semester's official or unofficial transcript to the ASUH Office...
We are now accepting unofficial and official transcripts.
If you are an incoming freshman, please send us your unofficial transcripts from STAR. We do not accept high school transcripts. -
All transcripts should be emailed to asuh@hawaii.edu or mailed to:
Associated Students of the University of Hawai'i at Mānoa
2465 Campus Road
Campus Center Rm 211A
Honolulu, HI 96822
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Must fully complete and submit a current version of the WH-1 form handwritten and signed, scanned and submitted through the online application
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Must have upload a Letter of Recommendation from a non-family member with contact information
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Is recommended to participate in an ASUH sponsored event within the following semester
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Please double check your UH Student ID when applying
ADDITIONAL CONSIDERATIONS
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Letter of Recommendation can be overlooked upon request only due to extenuating circumstances. Please email asuhuaa@hawaii.edu two weeks prior to application deadline.
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The UAA committee has discretion to fund all or part of any applications.
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An applicant's GPA/transcript is a dependable indicator
HIGH FINANCIAL NEED CATEGORY APPLICANTS ONLY:
A copy of your Free Application for Federal Student Aid (FAFSA) for the APPLYING academic year with the Estimated Family Contribution (EFC) must be submitted via the online application. Please include your full name.
UNIQUE SITUATION/NON-TRADITIONAL CATEGORY APPLICANTS ONLY:
Applicants include but not limited to:
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Student parents
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Non-traditional Freshmen
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Returning/Transfer Students
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Situations that significantly affects student (i.e. family related, health related)
FUNDING DEADLINE FOR SPRING 2024 ASUH SCHOLARSHIP APPLICANTS
All applications are accepted until TBA
All application materials must be submitted by [TBA]
IF YOU DO NOT SUBMIT ALL APPLICATION MATERIALS ON TIME, YOUR APPLICATION WILL NOT BE CONSIDERED. NO EXCEPTIONS!
*Students who have received this award are not able to apply again within the same academic school year*
APPLICATION PROCESSING
As of Spring 2014, all applications are electronic and all materials must be submitted by the deadline. Applications are processed by ASUH and reviewed by the Undergraduate Academic Affairs (UAA) Committee within two - four weeks of the submission deadline. Essays and Letter of Recommendations are to be reviewed by Faculty members. Students will be notified of the decision via email after the UAA Committee has made a set decision.
*Students who have received this award are not able to apply again within the same academic school year*
ASUH SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION FORMS
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Online Application - application form for the ASUH Scholarship Award (see below)
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Letter of Recommendation - to be filled out by an appropriate reference
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WH-1 - tax form to be handwritten and submitted in PDF format via the online application, US citizens must fill out Sections A and E.
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Section A:
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(If you are a US citizen) "USA" or "United States of America" in the Country of Residence and Country of Residence for Tax Purposes
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Use a permanent mailing address not a dorm or temporary address
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Section E:
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Handwritten and signed
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Electronic signatures are not accepted
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Format:
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Please do not change the format of the WH-1 (do not open in Google Docs)
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Frequently Asked Questions - answers to a list of common questions regarding the ASUH Scholarship
ASUH SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY GUIDELINES
ESSAY GUIDELINES
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Please follow the essay requirements for the category you are applying under. You will be scored on how well your essay addresses the specific questions listed. The rubric can be found below.
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Answer the required essay prompt for your corresponding category in 750 words or less, double-spaced, 12 point font in Times New Roman.
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Essay Prompts
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Academic Achievement Applicants Only: What is your idea of excellence?
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High Financial Need Applicants Only: How has your financial situation shaped your academic career?
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Unique Situation/Non-Traditional Student Applicants Only: What is one example of adversity that affected your outlook/ perspective in life?
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SCHOLARSHIP & ESSAY SCORING RUBRIC
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The ASUH Scholarship Essay is scored based on this rubric. All scores will be divided by 4 to create a score on a 4.0 scale
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NOTE: Your total score will be based out of a total of 100 points. This score is calculated based on your GPA and/or EFC, Essay Score and Letter of Recommendation. All Components must be included for consideration.